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My Affair With The Umbrella

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Cold metal pressed against the flesh
So sensitive, so gentle, the stars kissed my head
Push up the protector of my fragile mind

“Dear Umbrella, will you be mine?”

The night’s precious, precocious, nightlight
From the sun as bright to the stem full of spite

“Star, I was alone the entire evening.”

Thrown from the blanket covering us
Were teardrops of silver, gas, and dust particles
Corrosive truths dripping with my blissful deceit
This piece was written for :iconparanoidrabbits:
I take a liking to it, but I wish to improve it very much.
So please, don't hold back any criticism
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ContagiousPixie's avatar
I wish I could write this good. :)